For each race, include a specific section with the makeup requirements in a subsection; and the RP requirements in a subsection, much like we do in the national race packets

Selunari - replace the picture with a person who actually meets the required makeup requirements

Changing Your Class - change to reference the CMA - it no longer involves talking to your home chapter

We never define what a Battle Board is

mentions Focus time, but we don't define focus until later (p 103)

Also mentions a call of “Altered Effect” - this is the incorrect call, it should be “Altered”.

Alchemy - we should mention the 10 & 20 rank alchemy benefit from educated in the alchemy section

Archery - I'd recommend including “Note that ranged attacks using skills can be used from any direction, bypassing the from behind requirement.” from the “weapon attacks” section

Assassinate - we reference you can use a from any direction with a ranged weapon, but that's a general property of 'from beyond' skills. We either need to include this disclaimer with all non-melee from-beyond attacks, or none of them. Including it with only some causes confusion.

Counteract may want to reference that it works with shields

Create Potion - we should mention the 10 & 20 rank benefit form the educated skill

Create Trap - we should mention the 10 & 20 rank benefit form the educated skill

Destruction/Stun Blow - the example of how it works on elementals is kinda iffy

Enhanced Strike - should also bold the “melee” aspect since its one of the 'from behind' skills that can't be used at range

Evade - should mention its interaction with the Massive carrier.

One Handed Master - does not reference that you can not thrust with blunt weapons

Parry - Intercept & parry should use more consistent language between them

Resist Elements - references “Foundation element attack” should probably be “Foundation element effect”, though “Foundation Element” is not technically an effects group

Resist Necromancy - being pendantic, it allows you to resist a necromancy effect not a necromantic effect though the intent is clear.

Sleep/Paralysis Blow - should highlight the melee part, because its one of the few behind skills that can't be done at range

Slow/Weakness Blow - should highlight the melee part, because its one of the few behind skills that can't be done at range

Staff - we say you can't use thrusting, but don't say its because its a blunt weapon

Thrown Weapon - should be worded like small weapon, to make clear it allows blunt and edged

Two Handed Blunt - does not say it can not be used to thrust

Phase says it works like Dodge, but doesn't say how it works - especially relevant given the restrictions on what dodge effects

Resist is a Smart Defense, but doesn't say it

this entire section needs rewritten

We need to be clear about the differences between armor points, armor rating, armor tag, suit of armor. We are sloppy in our terminology

mentions it can't be used with Intercept; but Intercept says you can do it with nothing in hand, and that the range you can reach with your shield is relevant. I'm pretty sure including Intercept is just wrong.

the shield construction requiring 5/8inch pipe is no longer true – it should use the same wording as weapon construction

Spellcrafting does not explain how “spellcrafting difficulty” works. The example for spellcrafting has the caster preparing 4 scrolls, one of which is difficulty 2. It does not reference him needing to spend 2 high magic to prepare the scroll, but does mention he has 5 high magic, but mentions him only using 4 of it. It also references two scrolls by incorrect names, and references a 3rd rit that doesn't exist any more. Add a description of what Spellcrafting difficulty is & fix the example.

make sure we don't use the term “Build” any more

“Weapon Delivery” is uses in several places, but “Weapon Delivery” does not exist in our rules system – its “Physical Delivery”. Weapon is a Qualifier not a Delivery.

we should get all the terminology around counted actions made consistent

we should get all the terminology around “Altered” made consistent

The chart sometimes describes the skill differently than the skill description. For example https://rules.alliancelarp.com/Elemental-Augmentation does not mention it can only be used on Evocation effects.

we should restructure and just include the info the player needs to play in one section; and the details the NPCs need in another

A: Empowered Strike + Precise Blow + Signature Spell -or- Combined Strike + Precise Blow + Signature Spell

Workshops are defined as being not being stealable but worth 10g.